YouME

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Talking to the wind, you blazed my mind
At a glance, I knew you were of my kind

Then, my life was black and blank,
I craved every minute to reclaim past clock,
I worked my way to bridge the Life’s crack,
However, I knew not that my life’s stood on a single pivot plank…

Then we met in a strange kind,
It was one of those intense interviews you would always have in mind
It all began from a message; Message from my heart
I wish angels could tell me ahead whats in stock;

Time cruised with a trance score behind
With amazing earnest we walked hand in hand
Many a times I still marched alone;
Giving me a feeling of super natural clown

Confused, Convinced we spent a lot of time
Made no effort to discover the true value dime
Just drew a heart and called it “valentine”
Truly, the kernel in me was covered with a shell of ice

Illusion is what I lived in, the “wanna be” in me always kicked in;
Dreamt of “something”, numb to realize what is actually coming
You made me unleash few unpleasant facts of life
Somebody rightly said -
Life is what that happens when you are busy planning “something” else

Never had I thought life could be so bland
You have taken the air out of my gland

Talking to my mind, This time you blazed away
Leaving me gazed you breezed away

                                                             - Poem by Chandramouli ©

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8 Responses to “YouME”

  1. Too Good Mouli….. What inspired you to become a poet man..

  2. Good Poem on love

  3. Man’O’ Maaan! Brilliant…I believe in rebirth now…SHakespeare is back!!!!!! :)Absolutely brilliant… how many hats do u wear mouli?? Amazin…Now don temme tat talent synonymn is Mouli..i some dic…read it as dictionary :):).. Kudos Mouli!! gr8 one..

  4. @Aldy

    Nothing in specific, probably its the way to let go my emotions .. thanks for visiting..

  5. Go go go… Mouli unleash the poetic talent in you :). 6.5/7

  6. Good one.

    I think you are talking of lost time. Pls tell if my understanding is correct?

  7. Really Its a nice one.

    You are a good poet. You are able to put out your feelings in poetry form. Keep writing.

    Pls ignore my 1st comment.Sorry some error I was not able to read fully. Now when i read fully I could get.

  8. Thanks for your encouragement and support… i am plannin to write one on our gr8 UVCE days…. all of you will have a role to play in this.. lets see how it comes…

    Thanks,
    CM

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